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Awesome. keep rocking

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Nice, you could be big on TiktTok rapping it :)

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Oh man, wouldn't that be crazy! 😀

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Mar 16, 2022Liked by Punit Thakkar

Congratulations to youuuuu!!!

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Mar 15, 2022Liked by Punit Thakkar

Love this format!

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Video poems are a great idea. Nice work!

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Thanks Chris! Congrats on completing 50 editions of Iterate!

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Mar 15, 2022Liked by Punit Thakkar

Loved it! I think you did a great job in creating this video. Did you create all the art yourself? I think it would be good though, if you had a bit of a starter in the video. Even if it's just a title card with the poem's title for about 2 seconds or so. Now as soon as I click the link the video starts, and before I realize it, I have already missed the first line. Other than that: keep experimenting like this! (And monetize it.)

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Thanks for the awesome feedback as ever, Arjan. Yes, I did create all the art myself! It was a great experience 😃

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