Live in the now. Loved the poem, the idea of it, and the conclusion. Well written. Really liked the video, too! Maybe it could have been a bit slower, but it was great to watch and listen to. Also liked how you played with the fonts to show the different voices. Nice one.
Agreed on the pace - I was obsessed with keeping it under 1 minute for some reason, I could have avoided that. Thanks for the feedback. Also thanks for noticing the fonts, I put in a lot of thought into that!
Thanks for your kind words, this is a poem that means a lot to me.
Live in the now. Loved the poem, the idea of it, and the conclusion. Well written. Really liked the video, too! Maybe it could have been a bit slower, but it was great to watch and listen to. Also liked how you played with the fonts to show the different voices. Nice one.
Agreed on the pace - I was obsessed with keeping it under 1 minute for some reason, I could have avoided that. Thanks for the feedback. Also thanks for noticing the fonts, I put in a lot of thought into that!
Thanks for your kind words, this is a poem that means a lot to me.
PS: another poet friend also recently wrote about this theme. It's really interesting to see you two deal with almost the same subject in your own unique ways. Check it out here: https://shotsandthoughts.substack.com/p/the-illusion-of-time
Thanks Arjan, it was a great read!
Nice piece! Interesting and fun!
Thanks Bob! Glad to receive praise from a fellow poet 😀